I found it interesting how on it's surface it seemed like an era gone by but there were a few tell-tale signs of today - such as the content/language in your postings throughout the building complex.
I think the breakfast scene was a bit long in this context, but could really be a short film unto it's own if you played with it. I think you could keep it in and cut in to a fourth of it's length and it would work perfectly.
I too, thought Jenn's camera work was stellar! Filming at the low angle for your "caper" set the tone perfectly.
I already see the sequel - go to where your mock pizza party was to be held and set up a hidden camera.
As for I Want Alot Now, I think it would have been great to have quick cuts of the different delivery people bringing all this stuff to your door. I liked the split screen at the opening (not really split but gave the appearance of it) and don't know if you planned this but your shirts worked together perfectly!
The music was perfect and I loved the different cameras rolling all at once and the way you cut it together. I think you're timing is right on, too.
Just one itsy bitsy criticism - the first couple of scrolling screens went by a little too fast for me to read with comfort.
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